Trevor - Clash of the Creatures - 3D Proven Systems

arlo

Hi Guys, 

Sculpted a new creature for the Clash of the creatures hosted by 3D Proven Systems. 
Any feedback is welcome.

DGB

An adorably terrifying little scamp! Great job on the coloring. The mandibles look very flat in the color version, however; it looks like it just has an open mouth with red teeth. Also, the connective tissue going into the shoulder looks too pronounced.

arlo

I tought it was a cool idea the red teeths to scare off potential predators. will check out teh shoulder area

Isunoj

Nice creature. The colors looks very good. Which render engine you are using.

arlo

hey, I used keyshot

EricElwell

Cool! the slimeyness is very eyecatching. If you are looking to improve, I'm not sure that I can give a great suggested solution, but I would point out that tails feel a bit stiff to me in the render. In general, the creature is very lean, so the stiff feeling works throughout the body, but the form of the tails implies flexibility. I think what is throwing it for me is the surface handling.. maybe a lightened tone and some translucency / subsurface scattering might make those tails really feel malleable. Overall though, I think it looks great. good luck!

JamieMc

This is really well done!  Great piece!

Crazy_pixel

Cute creature design, now we need an animation