Well, the indentation for the spine seems a bit deep, but otherwise the back seems fine to me. As for the front: 1. My eye kind of wants a bit more definition in the interaction between clavicle and deltoid. 2. The sternum and solar plexus seem a bit sunken and flat. Look at the flow of your spine and remember the ribcage slopes outward from clavicle to plexus. 3. Not to be too harsh, but your lats feel a bit blobby, get in there and get those suckers. Use lots of reference! 4. There is a weird bunching between bicep and tricep, reexamine your reference to clarify the volume of this structure. 5. Navel/pubis seems a bit flat. Some sag might make it more interesting.
Sorry if i went overboard, but this stuff was noticeable because the rest is good, so do not feel bad!
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1. My eye kind of wants a bit more definition in the interaction between clavicle and deltoid.
2. The sternum and solar plexus seem a bit sunken and flat. Look at the flow of your spine and remember the ribcage slopes outward from clavicle to plexus.
3. Not to be too harsh, but your lats feel a bit blobby, get in there and get those suckers. Use lots of reference!
4. There is a weird bunching between bicep and tricep, reexamine your reference to clarify the volume of this structure.
5. Navel/pubis seems a bit flat. Some sag might make it more interesting.
Sorry if i went overboard, but this stuff was noticeable because the rest is good, so do not feel bad!
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