Portfolio work - Female fantasy assassin character WIP

Dilyan

Hey guys, first post here.

I'm working on a fantasy assassin character for my portfolio and I'd love to get some c&c and general feedback if possible.  

At the moment I've blocked out the proportions and I am working on coming up a design for her clothes and accessories.  I'm not working off of concept art, so it's a bit of a challenge, but persistence is pulling me through. Detailing and creating more interesting designs (such as belt buckles, buttons, more straps and so on) will come when I'm happy with the overall feel of the character. I'd love to hear your guys's opinions and critiques on the model.

Thanks in advance!

Dilyan

Hey guys.
Here's a lil' update. It's been a while since I posed about it, so here we go. It's going slow, but I'll get there.

Dilyan

Hellu! 
Another progress update. I've decided to leave out the hood for now, as I don't think it fits with her whole design.  I still have it as a subtool in case I want to go back to it to explore different options but it's highly unlikely.  I've also fixed the length of the arms as I thought they were a bit too long.  Hips were adjusted too to make her look more feminine.

slosh

Feels like there are some anatomical issues with the head but would need closer shots to figure out what they are exactly.  One thing that really stands out is that she has no butt at all.  Even a woman with a petite build would have more junk in the trunk so to speak.  With the hips you've given her, there should be a lot more going on in the rear!

Dilyan

slosh said:

Feels like there are some anatomical issues with the head but would need closer shots to figure out what they are exactly.  One thing that really stands out is that she has no butt at all.  Even a woman with a petite build would have more junk in the trunk so to speak.  With the hips you've given her, there should be a lot more going on in the rear!

Thanks for the feedback!  Here's a closeup on the head. I'll make sure to give her some booty too.  

Ouran

Hey ! Quick feeback here, her cranium is too tale. You can take a big move brush and pull it down by 15%. Hope this helps

Dilyan

Hi! 

Here's yet another update. Thanks to the feedback from slosh and Ouran, I've fixed the head and gave her a bit more butt volume.  I wasn't happy with the corset, so I gave her a new one and I think it turned out better, but I'd love some opinions. Also, the hood's back in the game and in a more interesting shape.  Another part that I've changed is the gloves.  I thought the wraps around her hands looked more like bandages and that didn't really fit.