Animations for showreel - need feedback / critics

BradleyMAdams

I'm building up for my showreel and looking for some feedback / critics on some animations I've done.

1.
http://syncsketch.com/playground/449bf291ded34ad089283c8065e5a88f#109356

2.
http://syncsketch.com/playground/f1e82e8fdc6c48d185dabcc055f8e737#109357

3.
http://syncsketch.com/playground/fa79d29ca7c94c7589b04f6c0197ea18#109358

4.
http://syncsketch.com/playground/eb72cf81714340538f8246524eecf945#109360

EVernier

1. Fix the run and add a settle when he hits the ground.

2. Look at some reference of someone smashing something on the ground. The hammer smash is a bit of a mess, his hand clips through the handle and the ground.

3. I think there's too much head movement and get rid of the camera move at the start.

4. Left you some notes!

Keep it up

BradleyMAdams

EVernier said:

1. Fix the run and add a settle when he hits the ground.

2. Look at some reference of someone smashing something on the ground. The hammer smash is a bit of a mess, his hand clips through the handle and the ground.

3. I think there's too much head movement and get rid of the camera move at the start.

4. Left you some notes!

Keep it up

1. the run was done like that to be very exaggerated, but I will tone it down as it does look weird upon reflection.

Thanks for the critics/feedback its very helpful!