Irex Animation - Feedback needed WIP

BradleyMAdams

Currently working on this animation and would appreciate any critics or feedback on its current progress. The only part I've yet to focus much on is the claws, so there are no claw finger movements since I always do them last.

After uploading it I can see some flaws aha, for example the ending looks abit wrong with the neck movements.

I've uploaded a playblast to syncsketch.

http://syncsketch.com/playground/992df4e5a6774a518a82e2a25f510f0c#107176

For some reason the video quality is poor

Might be easier to critic on this version http://syncsketch.com/playground/ecf6a61bfc4b4250927fbe7b4d703272#107239

Chris Rohlfing

Frame 88- 100: Arms seem to move symmetrically.

Frame 92- 100: Tip of tail should be pulled along straight while turning.  Right now its staying curved upwards

Frame 264-280 : Tail freezes


I drew on sketchfab hope it helps. 

penOr

My biggest note is to switch the arms from IK to FK if the rig allows it. Right now it's quite obvious the arms are in IK because they aren't bouncing naturally to the bodies movement. It's much easier to achieve natural arms in FK because the hands are affected by the previous joints

BradleyMAdams

Thanks for the comments, I've made adjustments from what was said and added some new movements etc. Its slowly getting there, I still need to work on the tail and some body movements.

http://syncsketch.com/playground/7eeec371909e4bea86b31b13f56b8094#109095