female anatomy help !

seimax

hi guys , i'm struggling pretty hard on this one , i've got a ton of references , but something feels weird
can't put my finger on it though, 



help pretty please 

Lucospade

First thing I notice is the angle of the sternum. It's super flat and is giving her a weird silhouette from the side.

seimax

indeed , good call ! 'gonna fix it then reupload a new image

Edrice

I agree that the volume of her rib cage seems a little flat from the side, most notably the upper part.

seimax

here it is , with minor tweaks here and there

Edrice

Still feels a bit to thin from the side.

Maxilator

I'm by no means an expert, but there is a crease from the end of the collar bone towards the armpit that looks off, the ankle joint also looks very wide to me from the side view. Keep it up! 

seimax

thanks a lot for your help guys , i've done as you said and made some tweaks for the rib cage and the fat distribution ( wich is hard , i'm trying to give her the "semi athletic" body type) but she have a better feel now :


if you see something else please tell me

jacob thomas

This is looking really nice. Depending on your reference/intended direction for this I think the main thing missing is a lot of subtle plane transitions. Other than that her neck thickness seems off, it is a little too thin from the front and too thick in the profile.

Here is a super quick liquify of some changes I would make, take them with a grain of salt though as without seeing your references they could be way off base.
http://i.imgur.com/PNcVpL3.gif

seimax

hey jacob ! thank you so much for your time and help as well as your awesome gif ,it really helped me to find more weird stuff in my work ! the neck area was really weird , i can't believe i didn't see those problems before: