WIP-degel

oreoorbitz · Sep 2016

Ohai, I'm working on this new character for my second attempt at a portfolio. Hes from the zetman manga

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/nm/xfqduep755mi.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lx/j9x66g90onzy.jpg

Still gotta finish refining the shoes, horns, and hip thingies.

TheZaxer · Sep 2016

Looks really nice. I would work a bit on the legs though. The armor looks a bit repetitive, and the legs overall look a bit to thick, in the concept the legs are a bit thinner and the armor has more information in the silhouette.

oreoorbitz · Sep 2016

Ok, so i've applied a few suggestion I got from slack and twitch.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/sd/u7f54clw607a.jpg

R3D · Sep 2016

Looking really good, but take another look how the concept's legs and wrists.

Your silhouette is off at the legs, the concept is much slimmer, and the wrists are much more angular.

Also could we get a side view of the legs, since the concept has a pretty cool silhouette for it

WIP-degel

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