return for crits

Sarsky

i am currently working on this mdoel and trying to achieve the maximum detail i can possible do with my fan art of jonnah hex, just recently did a massiv eupdate on teh clothing and learnt a little on folds and etc through burne hogarths clothing book.

love any help i can get to achieve really high end detail!

Sarsky

Brian "Panda" Choi

Brian "Panda" Choi

The clothes are not reading like leather.  Are you noticing how "floofy" the folds are reading right now?

Like there's not sharp corners or creases amidst them?

Also, I'd avoid using that mat cap.  Use something more neutral, like a gray clay matcap.

Sarsky

@Brian yeah i think i know what you mean, my main struggle is finding reference and picking out what materials are what and etc. then it comes ot how to actually make it lok like folds, its either too muddy or to sharp or indented.

ill go back and do more research on the lcohthing and try doing a better job on the leather. and the jacket.

and understood, i will stick with basic material and some other materials.

thanks for the crit, ill be back in a couple of days.

jose.fuentes

have you tried using marvelous?

Sarsky

@jose.furentes i havent used that software, why is it a retopo software? or a siftware for clothing?

jose.fuentes

Sarsky said:

@jose.furentes i havent used that software, why is it a retopo software? or a siftware for clothing?

its a great software for making clothing, i highly recommend it