Trying to do likeness, looking for some critiques.

Linfo

Hello! I'm doing a young Al Pacino (it's in its early stages) and I feel like I could really use some critiques.
Please help!

I added some reference pictures below.

Leinadien

I think maybe make his eyes a bit bigger, make his brow more pronounced by smoothing out his forehead a bit. Add some more fat above/at the end of his mouth. There is no doubt more that has to be done, but it's what I think at this point would make the most difference.

Linfo

Thank you for the advice!

I've tweaked it a bit more but I dunno, I feel like it's not there yet and I don't want to move onto detailing until the base looks good. 

Leinadien

Maybe the nose is a bit too long, chin too big, a bit more fat over the eye, a slightly modified eye?

Linfo

Thanks for the help!

This is the progress I made today. I feel like I've improved things a bit, but Im not quite there yet. 

Leinadien

I made his face symmetrical, maybe that will make things more obvious.

Linfo

Oh! That's a good idea. Thanks!

Linfo

Ok, I've worked on it some more. I feel like Im getting closer, maybe?

Linfo

New update, I feel like I'm done with the primary shapes.
Moving to secondary.

Linfo

Started detailing the face.

Linfo

Paint, pass1

Linfo

Quick bake test in Marmoset, need to do the spec map. 

Nerono

You should add a hair mesh in zbrush, just extract it from the scalp and sculpt the big shapes, to see if everything works together

Linfo

Yeah I agree. I need to do the spec map and then hair is what's next.

Eric Chadwick

This is coming along great!

Al has fairly pronounced eye bags. Maybe your model could use a bit deeper grooves under the eyes? He also seems to have a bit more hooded eyelids, though that depends on his boredom level I suppose.

Linfo

I decided to give this guy a unique hair style.
It's still a WIP, but it's getting there? Maybe? Making hair is absolute pain. 

PattyWhacker

What photo of Al Pacino did you use for the hairstyle? You should definitely use a hairstyle like Al Pacino if this is suppose be a likeness. I wouldn't go with anything else unless you're trying to create a fictional character who resembles Al Pacino.

In the high resolution model, I noticed that the details looked a bit off. It seems like you've added the texture through noise and it looks the same texture throughout the entire face. I would definitely check out this George Clooney likeness tutorial from this amazing artist Hossein Diba: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnVROI8SF9Y. You'll notice how crazy detailed you can get with the face. If you're aiming for in-game resolution, I'm not too sure if this hyper detailing really matters. Whenever I try to bake a 4k normal map for the head of my characters, my computer crashes.

It looks like you're making some good progress so far. Keep up the good work!