[Critique Needed] Ultimate Spider-Woman W.I.P

Kibou

Hi all! I am currently working on a sculpt of Ultimate Spider-Woman and could use some pointers on what I could to to make this look better. Thanks for your time!
 

Brian "Panda" Choi

Check the proportional size of your head relative to your body.  Yours is way too large.  If you use the head to measure the length of the body, it should be at 6.5 to 7 heads high for a heroic figure like Spiderwoman.  Using your current head, you're clocking in at around 5 to 6 heads high for a length.

Kibou

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Check the proportional size of your head relative to your body.  Yours is way too large.  If you use the head to measure the length of the body, it should be at 6.5 to 7 heads high for a heroic figure like Spiderwoman.  Using your current head, you're clocking in at around 5 to 6 heads high for a length.

Thanks much! I'll keep that in mind and fix the head size.

Sheers

Legs need more pushing and pulling.  The definition you wish to have is going to come from the back, and wrap around.  Have more references on your side and check out this article on the different body types!  It'll help you conceptualize Spiderwoman much better.

Leinadien

Try to match your sideview to these
https://www.3d.sk/photoThumbnail/2015-11/5722-729602/photo-of-leg-woman-animation-references-white-nude-slim-reference-meredith_640v640.jpg
https://www.3d.sk/photoThumbnail/2015-11/5722-729582/photo-of-arm-woman-animation-references-white-nude-slim-reference-meredith_640v640.jpg

Also the head is too large, the area under the breast need to be smoothed out so it appears she is wearing spandex. Also what the others said.

Kibou

Thanks for the advice everyone! I made a few changes to the mesh based on the great input i received. Tell me what you think. 

Kibou

Hair update.

Leinadien

Maybe this will help.

Kibou

Thanks for the feedback Leinadien!
Here are some more updates before I start to texture.

Kibou

Here are the hands and feet. I think they could use some more work.

Kibou

Low poly bake with Normal and AO. There are a few errors in the Normal bake map. Debating whether I should I re-bake or edit in photoshop.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Her stomach shouldn't be that flat.  Women have a bump that goes outwards before it reaches the mon pubis.

Kibou

Thanks Brian. Hope that looks better. Also Wireframe.

Kibou

More texture updates. Going to start on the hair soon.

Kibou

I am having the worst time with learning how to do decent poly hair. Any tips/ pointers could help.
 

SonicPrimus

Has this model been finished at this point?

kanga

The figure should be augmented for hero characters. There are a lot of things in your figure that need work. At this point you should aim at doing practice sculpts, and the best reference I have found is Daz. Daz is free and Has generic models you can use as reference.

The shin bone doesnt curve back. People can lock their shins at a revese angle for as much as 30 deg. Its not curved though. The hands, calfs, arms and feet need attention. Right now you would benefit from including the head in study figures.

Vertrucio

This is a thread necro of a post from 2016, likely by a bot that just joined today.

SonicPrimus

Actually, I was just genuinely interested in the idea of this version of Spider-Woman being made into a 3D model. Not many of those outside of the Spider-Man Unlimited mobile game in all honesty.