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Ichi
polycounter lvl 2
Aug 2016
Hi guys, first post.. looking for feedback/suggestions for my current summer work:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5bIFfueLWk&feature=youtu.be
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hg8ZB3GgZw4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJD2JLh5DTo
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AGoodFella
polycounter lvl 5
Aug 2016
Nice work. Only thing I might add is a little bit of exaggeration to the first shot when he says "into a jelly". I might jerk the body forward a little and push that bit more. This is being really picky and you might not even need it. Cool stuff!
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Ichi
polycounter lvl 2
Aug 2016
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W2YEB1u9h7k
Fixed it up a little, thanks for the feedback!
More sword stuff, going to be an air combo
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Fixed it up a little, thanks for the feedback!
More sword stuff, going to be an air combo