Acting piece - all feedback welcome

EmzLP

Hi everyone!

My first 'proper' post on these forums I guess! I'm working on sprucing up my showreel a little bit and so I've got stuck into blocking out an acting piece. It's in a really basic blocking stage, and no lip sync yet and few basic expressions as I want to get the poses right first. Of course any feedback is welcome and appreciated

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c03227115fa149bb93eb28adedd57cf1

slipsius

Left a couple notes. Looks  good so far

monster

I like where this is going. The camera framing and the hair color make me want to focus on the sitting guy instead of the talking guy though.

EmzLP

Thanks so much for the feedback! I had a bit more of a play with the camera and colours to try to keep the focus on the guy talking (not sure if it has worked?) - and then just some overall work on the blocking. 

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/5f9c31237e22454eb04de35cdce4f7d2#97266

slipsius

couple more small notes. Looks good though!