Gathering Feedback for my work~!

Alvin Irawan

Hello everyone,

Before starting this off I would like to thank you for checking out my post. 

What I am working here is a design prototype for a game that I am working on as a school project. A quick synopsis for the game: Its really similar to FNAF TJOC (Five night's at freddies, The joy of creation) but I am designing a different interface / gameplay and added a storyline to the game.

Gameplay




Character/Monster

The feedback that I am looking for is about the 3d model of the player and monster! They are a Low poly single mesh models that i'm trying to keep simple and I have some image reference for the monster if anyone would like to know more (amnesia, numenera slidikin). Any feedback regarding my work’s truly appreciated.

 

Here is some question that would really help me out if you answer them:

1) Do those 3D models reaches the bare minimum standard an indie game company/industry has?

2) What would you like to be improved the most?

3) What do you dislike the most about the models?

4) What is your advise to make this models have the acceptable requirements for a standard indie game asset?

Thank you for your time and attention!

Alvin Irawan

Wireframe

BucketOfNuggets

Maybe have a go at this tute.

http://www.digitaltutors.com/tutorial/689-Creating-a-Low-Poly-Game-Character-in-Maya-and-Silo

Alvin Irawan

BucketOfNuggets said:

Maybe have a go at this tute.

http://www.digitaltutors.com/tutorial/689-Creating-a-Low-Poly-Game-Character-in-Maya-and-Silo

Hi there, Thank you for showing me that tutorial! I will check it out later as a guidance to my projects.

Alvin Irawan

Update!

In this version I have fixed the body proportion, and topology/overall looks for the player. I have also added details such as a hat and a messenger bag. The hat and the bag are separate mesh that I've combined to the body. In the previous version I tried to create the mesh by eyeballing it. In this version I've added proper image plane reference and remodel my mesh according to my sketches. Any Feedbacks are appreciated!

Wireframe

Normal View


Smooth View

Brian "Panda" Choi

Your topology needs work.  Less polys, better flow.

Take a look at these models for reference to better topological flow.  Note how many polys they need to use to communicate the round forms of the legs, arms, etc.  Your hands have bad topology as well.  Look at the links below for really good examples from the Polycount wiki.


http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/BodyTopology
http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/Limb_Topology