Gathering Feedback for my work~!

Alvin Irawan · Aug 2016

Hello everyone,

Before starting this off I would like to thank you for checking out my post.

What I am working here is a design prototype for a game that I am working on as a school project. A quick synopsis for the game: Its really similar to FNAF TJOC (Five night's at freddies, The joy of creation) but I am designing a different interface / gameplay and added a storyline to the game.

Gameplay

Character/Monster

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/5g/2j6p9b30jiqz.jpg

The feedback that I am looking for is about the 3d model of the player and monster! They are a Low poly single mesh models that i'm trying to keep simple and I have some image reference for the monster if anyone would like to know more (amnesia, numenera slidikin). Any feedback regarding my work’s truly appreciated.

Here is some question that would really help me out if you answer them:

1) Do those 3D models reaches the bare minimum standard an indie game company/industry has?

2) What would you like to be improved the most?

3) What do you dislike the most about the models?

4) What is your advise to make this models have the acceptable requirements for a standard indie game asset?

Thank you for your time and attention!