Advice and critique needed.

oneeyeoracle

Hello!

I want to become better at art, but I dont know where to start or what to improve.

 here's some sketches and paintings




thanks!

Aaron Barnett

You have some really interesting character designs here, I like the silhouettes. I would focus on making your pieces clearer and easier for people to visually read at a glance. Build layer on layer if that helps, because it's all about visual translation. People have to be able to immediately read what's right in front of them, otherwise they just move on.

Looking forward to seeing what you turn out next time! 

miguelnarayan

Agreed with the last poster, I like the energy in your stuff, it feels like you really enjoy it. Focus on a problem at a time, if you're not good at x subject, go research it.