Back to the future marty mcfly 3d character feedback please :D

Ramborf70

Hey guys haven't posted in a long time been working on my characters for my portfolio I would love some feedback please anything and everything

estilosavino

Hello

I am from Argentina

I loved the 3d model

you have bigger images to see the texture of jean?

you sell the 3d model?

(Sory for my english, do you speak spanish?)

Ramborf70

Hi sorry for the late reply.

thank you!

I'm afraid its not for sale its just for my portfolio I'm working on it at the moment but thank you for looking and commenting

(sorry i don't speak Spanish haha .)

estilosavino

you have more photos? of jean texture?

Ramborf70

Yea no problem.I used quixel suite to get a base texture then just edit in photo shop.Hope the images are okay let me know if not.

skyline5gtr

Few things stand out, the face structure is a little off, the pants are color wise too light and too tight. The blue shirt near collar should be a diamond shape

Brian "Panda" Choi

Looks like a solid base, but I'd assert as well that his vest and upper torso clothes need more poof.

vavavoom

nice work, instantly recognizable.

only thing i could say is that i think... his jeans are a little too tight maybe?

Ramborf70

Thanks guys for the feed back ill get working on fixing some of the things use have mentioned and ill post updates! Thanks so much

estilosavino

IT'S EXCELLENT. DE YOU HAVE AN IMAGE IN ZOOM SHIRT AND JACKET?
        



Ramborf70 said:

Yea no problem.I used quixel suite to get a base texture then just edit in photo shop.Hope the images are okay let me know if not.

Ramborf70

A little update on the likeness I changed a few things what you guys think is it getting better?The one on the right is the updated one just changed a few thing with the eyes and just over all face structure.I am working on the clothes as well make them better.

Ramborf70

estilosavino I will put up closer images of the shirt and jacket, I'm just working on changing a few things on them when I'm done ill post them up

estilosavino

THANKS, I sent a direct message from the page

you could see?

braintrain

Really nice project! I love the movies
I´d say you should work on the nose... Could be the different lighting but it seems very small now compared to before.
I am basing this off the pic that @skyline5gtr posted. Maybe thickening the wings and bringing down the septum a bit might help. It often depends on the tilt of the head and I often have a hard time to judge that correctly but yeah... I think the nose is something you should look at!

Ramborf70

braintrain  cheers dude Yea its lp mesh I must have changed it ill definitely work on the nose thanks man I was looking at some of your work very cool  creatures   

estilosavino

@braintrain   You could see the project shirt you send by mail?

my email is: estilosavino@gmail.com  - talk by mail

thanks!

estilosavino

@braintrain   friend you could see my MD Inbox message?

estilosavino

Hello!