Female Blood elf

Pabs

trying to figure out how some of the chest armor works.



this is the concept i'm using (by ju liper)

korale

She's looking really cool so far. Biggest problem right now is that her breasts look like two round balloons attached to her torso and they aren't obeying gravity. This should help- nsfw 
Check out some images of how breasts look in a push-up bra or a corset. 

dand3d

Korale hit the nail on the head. Likewise I feel that the but is way to big. I did a paint over.


Likewise the face does not resemble the concept art I don't know a good way to say how but I feel that the lips are a bit to pouty and the cheek bones stick out to far.

Also the model seems to have a small head, and all together it appears to be 8.5ish heads tall. While it is hard to tell how many heads tall the character is in the concept it appears to be closer to 7.5 heads tall. 


I hope this feedback is somewhat helpful. 

Tomiajayi

I agree with the paintover! I really like the face though, nice crisp lips.

Pabs

@korale oh snap, thx for this. don't know how i didn't even think of looking at corset/push-up bra reference! i'll get on this asap

@Dan3D i really appreciate the paintover, so helpful.  I'll try to work on everything you've mentioned a bit more!

@Tomiajayi  thank you, ive been having a really hard time with lips, but i'll probably go back and rework them along with the face.

Pabs

hey guys, did some tweaking from the crits i received. 



I'm still not happy with the face though

Pabs

calling the high poly done.



moving onto texturing now. first texture basic pass in Ddo (still a lot to do).



Close up of the face (something doesn't look, not sure what,)



and a list of things to do
-fix/add folds on cloth
-fix/add edges on certain areas 
-add minor wear/tear
-re-work gloves?
-adjust cloth color
-add eyelashes
-fix boot insertion