BlackHand - Warcraft - Orc

SveinY

New character for my portfolio

HP so far, it need a bunch of work especially on the armor



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Wendy de Boer

I think the face and armor look cool so far. I also like the detailing on the arms.
However, his body proportions could use some work. He seems oddly pinched at the waist. A more squared off look might work better.
In fact, his whole upper torso doesn't feel quite as massive as I would expect for an orc. His rib cage generally seems a bit small in relation to his massive arms.

I also think that the lower body silhouette doesn't sell him as muscular and lean from the waist down. It doesn't look like he has big quads and calves under those pants. The legs mostly seem uniformly thick and rather unshapely. I would definitely try and add some s-curved gesture to the legs. There should also be quite an abrupt transition from the vastus lateralis down to the knee, as that's often what will sell a leg as looking strong, as opposed to simply thick.

Other than that, I think the shape of his butt is very effeminate. It could stand to be a lot more lean looking, as well. I think the way you have it now, the lower body reads more as overweight than strong, which looks strange since he's obviously lean enough for his abs to show.

Before continuing with the armor, I would suggest you work on the base body a bit more, and block out the musculature in the legs before covering them with pants. I think that will help to make him look more imposing overall.

SveinY

@ Wendy de Boer Hey thank you so much for the crit, I did go back and worked on the base body more tho it does not show as much as I thought it would since he so covered in armor heh


So I am pretty much done with the HP of both him and his weapon now, tho I may go over and add a bit more details here and there but I gonna hit the low poly real soon

Wendy de Boer

Nice improvement! Looking forward to see this finished.

MadGunslinger

This is gonna be awesome! Keep us posted!

TomGT

Ooh very nice progress! With some cleanup to solidify the armor edges, this should look awesome. Keep up the great work!

DanielJohnsson

Cool work!, He looks massive!, Looking forward seeing this dude with textures

Leinadien

That'll be fun to retopologize.

SveinY

Thank so much everyone!

So here a quick shot of how stuff is going so far. I just started on the textures

tda

Progress on this is looking fantastic dude, that highpoly is SIICKKK! Excited to see how the textures progress though it looks like you're already off to a solid start.

MadGunslinger

Really cool stuff! I think some SSS on the skin is gonna do wonders here. Looking forward to see the end result!

SveinY

@ tda Thanks!
@ MadGunslinger Thank you dude, yeah when I put more work on the skin + SSS it really helped him out


Oh I am calling this buddy done now Viewer here : https://www.artstation.com/artwork/N21r5

tda

Sweet work dude, caught this on artstation this morning. Came out killer!

Wendy de Boer

Nice! I like the embers and the subtle glow effects on his face.

boeing2000

Nice work' looks awsome. Is this Zbrush?

Blade113

that's so fackin' badass

Mateus

Great work! Love the first shot! 
Something feels strange from his waist down though, but I can't tell what it is...

SveinY

@ tda Thanks dude!
@ Wendy de Boer Thanks!
@ boeing2000 Thanks and nope its Marmoset Toolbag.
@ Blade113 Thanks you!
@ Mateus Hmm yeah I kinda agree I should have used more time on the base of his body but oh well, lesson learned for the next character