Skateboarding Animation WIP/Crit

curt09

Hey, so this is my first post on here. Been silently stalking for a while now but not animated anything outside of work for a while. Here's a sort clip that i've just finished blocking and could do with feedback. I can see mistakes like weighting and foot placements but id love to know what you guys think as I carry on with it. 

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Arturow

Everything is working right now to me , I know that you are still in blocking but I think everything is good. When you get to polish try to arc the hands and overlap them.
This part looks good but I wonder if it will look better to speed the right foot to boost more his acceleration at sec 2 ( or maybe is correct and it only need helps a little bit from the body idk. I have mixed feelings about that haha

Good work!

EVernier

Looks really good so far. I think you could work on the hips when he kicks off the ground at 2 secs, it kinda pops a little. At second 3ish, I think his foot goes back too quickly. It's probably the right speed for real life, but I'd add like 1 or 2 frames to that movement so it's smoother.