saint of gunpowder (in progress)

twoquiznos · Jun 2016

rokka of the six flowers
fremy speeddraw

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the things ive noted just from posting:

face is too slender at the chin and needs to be pulled down

the waist and curve of the body flowing from chest to hips is off

the back of legs r flat due to the fact im missing polys

hands have not been refined and feel to big

also my poly count as of this post is about 9000 but i have no set limit

feel maybe quarter of the way done

as of right now i still need to uv map and would like to do real colors maybe ill start doing small parts and post the small steps as well

comments and critiques would be of value.
it does not have to be nice just needs to have direction in getting closer to my end result

please feel free to build off my own critique on myself

twoquiznos · Jun 2016

quick update

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twoquiznos · Jun 2016

i re did the face though i dont know if its much better..... i think im going to take a break from her face and move on to another area for a while see what happens

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twoquiznos · Jun 2016

so ive been getting frustrated with the face and just cant seem to just let it be, but
for now i feel like ive gotten much closer to the concept art so for now will call it good on the face

if anyone would be kind enough to give me some tips to help get the face just that much better please give me a helping hand