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3D Game Environment "The Bathhouse" [UE4]

Hi everyone! :)
I have been working on this with two of my friends am studying with, we are at the end of our 1 year now.
I would love any kind of feedback, so I can make my next project even better :)
Remember also to check out my portfolio at: https://www.artstation.com/artist/madsjensen
Thanks
Vedio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dx3TLyoKv7A

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  • Savannakhet
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    Savannakhet polycounter lvl 11
    Pretty good stuff, some places it can be improved:

    I'm not sure about the pillars that surround the bath itself - they don't seem to be part of any structural support and look a bit odd just placed around the bath propping nothing up.

    The dome itself feels slightly wrong, basically I don't believe that the pillars around the outer wall would would prop up such a heavy structure,

    The yellow light is way too bright - Candles don't generate that much light. Also I'd de-saturate it a little bit, its a bit garish for my personal taste.

    The whole thing is very shiny, which suggests that it's quite wet, but it doesn't look very moist. Maybe a subtle fog effect? There doesn't appear to be any natural ventilation, so I think it would get very damp and a bit mouldy quite quickly.

    That rug is way too low-res next to the floor tile.
  • MJMadsJensen
    Thanks for an great comment SAVANNAKHET :) That's some great stuff to take with me, and put an extra eye on for another time. Once again thx :)
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