PC-CSGO | Aimbot (AWP) - FINISHED

dcneil

This AWP is now finished, you can find it here on the steam workshop: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=690321985

Time to start on a new adventure, this time an AWP. Will update as I have more progress. For now all I got is a file ready to start working on. The idea is to make a weapon that has auto aim, controlled by an A.I brain inside the gun. Colour scheme will be silverish/chrome and the style is gunsmith.

dcneil

First concept

dcneil

Made some more updates to the concept

dcneil

Final concept for the day. I'm thinking about replacing the "brain" with a targeting screen/monitor instead. I think it will fit the theme better.

dcneil

This is the "final" concept. Will port it into 3d coat now. Changed the name and ditched the brain, no more A.I.

dcneil

Made a few changes to the concept and transferred it to the UV/Model. A lot to be done from here. I'm going to update the screen, add some lines, fix the grips, update the filters and start texturing.



In-game test (With gunsmith)


Only the left side is "done" so the top looks a bit weird.

dcneil

Started adding linework and screws, the right side is also finished now.

dcneil

Currently looking like this after putting some work into the texture. Next up is fixing the monitor and adding a few more details.


I have also been messing with the alpha, trying to get the best possible reflectiveness with gunsmith.

dcneil

I've updated my scope because it seemed flat. Still haven't made any progress on the screen.

AKTrashheap

How do you plan to tell your audience this design is related to the 70s/80s  sci fi?  I am not sure neon effects are limited to that time period.

dcneil

AKTrashheap said:

How do you plan to tell your audience this design is related to the 70s/80s  sci fi?  I am not sure neon effects are limited to that time period.

Yeh that's my biggest problem when I got a bit far into this gun. I realized it's too futuristic and doesn't fit the 70s/80s theme a lot. I'll have to take a good look at what I can change to fix that. Thanks for the feedback @AKTrashheap

dcneil

I have updated the screen on the side

Jacko

very nice job 

Ezikyl

The way you've changed the display in the center of the furniture brings into mind the iconic trench run scene in a new hope, I like it. I wonder what it would look like if you changed the colour of the glowing elements - I would typically associate blue with more modern science fiction. Besides that, This is some great work, I love the way you've put glow in the small hole on the back of the bolt, a small detail but a good one nonetheless. Have you considered doing something with the inside of the bolt, which will show after each shot and when you reload?

dcneil

Ezikyl said:

The way you've changed the display in the center of the furniture brings into mind the iconic trench run scene in a new hope, I like it. I wonder what it would look like if you changed the colour of the glowing elements - I would typically associate blue with more modern science fiction. Besides that, This is some great work, I love the way you've put glow in the small hole on the back of the bolt, a small detail but a good one nonetheless. Have you considered doing something with the inside of the bolt, which will show after each shot and when you reload?

Thanks for the feedback, glad you like it! I can easily play around with the colour of the lights (which is one of the reasons I used grey/dark base colours). I have not put any thought yet into the bolt, thanks for bringing that up as I would've probably missed it. Any colour suggestions for the lights?

Ezikyl

A slightly desaturated yellow maybe, something to bring into mind the comparatively less complicated special effects of the time. Try out a few different colours, and decide for yourself.

dcneil

Ezikyl said:

A slightly desaturated yellow maybe, something to bring into mind the comparatively less complicated special effects of the time. Try out a few different colours, and decide for yourself.

For now I have updated the bolt, hopefully a nice little change

Endritv

That's looking very neat man! Love it so far

wannabe

Nice design man! Looking very sleek. Did you go for custom paint job?

dcneil

Here's a quick test with yellow lights @Ezikyl

dcneil

wannabe said:

Nice design man! Looking very sleek. Did you go for custom paint job?

It's gunsmith at the moment @wannabe . I like the tiny reflections it gives compared to custom paint job. The patina is only applied to the base so it works well.

@Endritv thanks man Still need to figure out which colours I'm going for on the light, then I want to "scratch" up some of the lines a bit and maybe add a bit of dirt on some edges.



With yellow

dcneil

I have decided to go for the yellow light as it fits the theme more. Made some changes to the back as well, using the same material and style as the grip on the front and middle.

DJayGaming

Nice but maybe try red lights as it symbolises danger more!

Ezikyl

Nice work!

sboxle

Looks cool man! Love what you've done with the pull reload bit (dunno the technical term haha). Would be interested to see how a 3 colour version looks as well, maybe tinting one of the grey shades.

Konras

You could try pushing this yellow more into orange/red. Now I think it blends to much with color of the weapon itself. However light being now only a delicate accent will fit more into AWP rarity tier. So yeah probably yellow is the best way to go.

Or maybe just a little orange? Especially in darker areas on lightning:

dcneil

Thanks @Konras @sboxle @Ezikyl @DJayGaming for feedback. I'm worried about doing too much for the rarity, but I'll give it a test, the orange light definitely looks nice. I tried red and I didn't like it too much. I'm keeping these colours @sboxle for now as they work well with the theme, if you got any colour suggestions I would be happy to try them out!

JonathanMacgregor

I think changing to yellow lights was a good idea, personally it's still feeling a bit futuristic to me but I honestly don't know what I would do to change that...

dcneil

How about orange? I also updated the texture a little bit with some dirt.

dcneil

Unless anyone has any feedback I think I'm pretty much done with this one. In this final update I have updated all the lines to be scratchy and have some ruined edges. I have also updated the big screws. 

sboxle

Orange is better IMO, yellow gets muddy blending with the grey.

nineteenss

Ah, yea! Orange seems much better. Looks so sick! 

Ego_Death

Holy smokes man, what an awesome concept, great execution to match.

dcneil

Thanks guys for all the feedback!

Here's the finished product: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=690321985

DJayGaming

Really nice I will be sure to like!