Form seems generally decent, the main thing that attracts my eye for more love and work would be the fabric and taking note and care on folds with how they fall and sit to be natural. seeing as you have text across both halves of the model im going to assume its not mirrored mapping and would like to see some some asymmetrical detail.
For presenting your work i advise against screen grabs as it looks like a unfinished asset, and taking the time to light your project will help make the textures look less flat and read better, and you can do a wireframe render as well to keep it all consistent. Moreso on the topic of presentation add a small frame, lose the black and essentially wasted space add your info into that frame.
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For presenting your work i advise against screen grabs as it looks like a unfinished asset, and taking the time to light your project will help make the textures look less flat and read better, and you can do a wireframe render as well to keep it all consistent. Moreso on the topic of presentation add a small frame, lose the black and essentially wasted space add your info into that frame.
Just my two cents.