Airship [WIP] C&C are welcome

Numai

Hi,
I'm pretty new to polycount and i think it's time for me to post my first "big" project here. It's kind of an Airship inspired by the art of Ian McQue.

For a long time I were afraid posting things here because of the amount of Great art and porfessionals here and I feel not good enough. But hey, somehow I have to get some critic to improve myself and its always better to get feedback from other people. With that said feel free to critisize  

Here are some temporary highpolys 

And some LP stuff

Numai

So the last few days I learned a bit more zbrush and practice a bit (it's been a long time I last used zbrush and even then I only knew a minimal amount of what one can do with it) 



I consider to do some "deeper" scratches or if it would be easier to handle this in the texture later.
And i think i need to go over the surface structure again, i want to make dented structure.

(btw i hope my english is not to shitty)

pixelpatron

Lookin' good so far, keep going.

Numai

Thank you and of course i do


After a few problems with alphas and brushes, I think I've got an acceptable result for a worn leather stool.

tomenjerry

Hey! Looking pretty good so far. I think you could work on the size (proportions) of your models details. Like the stool, the handle is too small/thin compared to the size of the stool, and the leather details are too large. Try to find a nice balance in the size of your details/ models. Hope it helps

Numai

Hey, thank you for the critic.

The handle is something i wasn't sure if it's the correct scale, well I gonna change it. I thought the leather isn't good readable on smaler scale, that's why I made it larger but I guess I need to play arround a bit.


Well I guess I play with it a bit longer..

Numai

So After an injury i can work again. 
I overworked the handle and the leather texture. I'm not 100% sure if the resolution is still a bit too large and i even don't know how to turn the material back to basic after the uv master.