Need Critique from Industry Professional for Character Class
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Hi!
I'm currently in the Digital Animation and Game Design program at Ferris. For an assignment in my character class, I need to have one of my works thoroughly critiqued by an industry professional. Feel free to send me a message or email for a critique too. I'd appreciate any feedback!
Thanks!
I also have a Marmoset Viewer on my ArtStation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ByX4D
His name is Morris B. Shnookems by the way!
I'm currently in the Digital Animation and Game Design program at Ferris. For an assignment in my character class, I need to have one of my works thoroughly critiqued by an industry professional. Feel free to send me a message or email for a critique too. I'd appreciate any feedback!
Thanks!
I also have a Marmoset Viewer on my ArtStation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ByX4D
His name is Morris B. Shnookems by the way!
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If you interested what's troubling me in this char, so it is all about anatomy. The shape of this character could be more promising and stilysed. You gave him fine details but he still can't scratch his ass... hands too weak, that's what I mean. Same for legs. The tail. It should flow from the spline smoothely. Now it makes 90 degrees corner with a back.
Back - sag forward, belly - pull up, choulders - move back, chin - rise up!)
And keep moving forward, improve your art, inspire and chalange yourself)
Good Luck!