Would like some critiques.

parth.dhulia

Hey Guys, this would be my first post on Polycount ( kinda excited ). Anyway, i have been learning game art for a while now and soon will be looking for a job. Need to start putting my portfolio together, specially the Artstation account. 

So i would like some final feed backs or tips to improve my work, before i post it in my portfolio, it would be a huge help. 

I will post a link to my old portfolio, just in case : http://dhuliaparth.wix.com/mrprince

- Ottoman Turkish Blunderbuss Pistol 

artofmars

Can you make a brighter render? its hard to see the texture work.

3dReaper

Never render on a black background. Render with a cool grey/blue or ambient sky.

Make lighting brighter, add lighting variations. Put work into the render just as much as you do into the actual piece.

Post your textures as well and wireframes.