Working on some new stuff, need some fresh eyes!

penOr · Apr 2016

Hey polycount, been working on 2 new shots to update my reel and was hoping I could get some fresh eyes to have a look. Feel free to comment on the rendering & staging as well as the animation! Thanks

AGoodFella · Apr 2016

Upload it to syncsketch so we can frame through it. But on first impressions, they're both looking solid. Maybe, on the first one, have the creature stretch a little more as he's falling and then squash him up as he lands. How much depends on what you think the creature's skin is like. But a little more squash and stretch will more weight to the creature as he lands. It also looks like the two front paws are a little twinned and land at the same time.

Overall, they're looking solid but it'll be easier to give feedback if we could frame through it.

penOr · Apr 2016

Good idea, here are the links

http://syncsketch.com/playground/4475537ac0de4d9f92755986f161a407#75180
&
http://syncsketch.com/playground/46382bcb4c414dc780f67aacf5b25a1b#75181

Arturow · Apr 2016

Those looks awesome !! , that landing is so good with the camera

! I left you some notes , they are just picky things. I already think is great :P

Working on some new stuff, need some fresh eyes!

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