DragonBall Z fan art, looking for feedback!

GarethHefferon

Hey guys, first post in Polycount! Looking for feedback on my submitted final year project piece. Two game ready characters at around 30k tris each, based off of the iconic villains from Dragon Ball Z. Looking for some feedback, what I hopefully did right, what I did wrong and where I can improve. https://www.artstation.com/artwork/rWAe2 - As long as it is constructive, be as harsh as you want!

Rawbert

Overall i think you did a great job.
I'm personally not a big fan of this realismisch style
The only thing that bothers me the most are freeza's eyes / eyelids.
Frieza always has this evil grinch on his face and yours just looks too friendly
Also i would have given frieza abit more body / face expressions since he's doing an ability.

GarethHefferon

Rawbert said:

Overall i think you did a great job.
I'm personally not a big fan of this realismisch style
The only thing that bothers me the most are freeza's eyes / eyelids.
Frieza always has this evil grinch on his face and yours just looks too friendly
Also i would have given frieza abit more body / face expressions since he's doing an ability.

Firstly, I appreciate you taking the time to comment Second, my aim with the two initally was to have them in a poker scene and for Cell to have the winning hand. So the goal was for cell to have a cocky look and frieza to look annoyed. I later revised the scene to a 1v1 and tried to pull off cell with a 'come at me bro' look and frieza to be annoyed that he has to waste his energy on him haha. I am also new to rigging/posing characters, so it is something I will definitely look into more in the future