The Luperca - Critique needed

Davidskiwan

Hey all, I'm working on a space ship concept, I've shown it round some of my friends and they say the perspective is off, wondering if anyone has time for a drawover? I've tried to correct it, but I think it hasn't really helped that much.

I'd also Like any feedback you may have on the designs, it's a small freighter with some fighting capabilities, it's meant to be loosley inspired by wolves ( I Hope that comes across)

Eric Chadwick

I think they look great. Have you tried using Sketchup for blockouts to draw on top of? Quite a common workflow these days for quite a few concept artists. Not a bad thing at all.