Willys Jeep

AdamJKnight_3D

Hello could I have some crits on this please? thank you for your time more views here - https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XdbQY

Nuclear Angel

I think it looks solid. But you should really embed all of the pictures here that you have on artstation. It would make it a bit easier to give you feedback then. One thing that is bothering me personally is the wiring on the lower left part of the jeep. What material is it supposed to be? As that is not clear, it really looks like a twisted cylinder only. Also what is it that is keeping it together? 

AdamJKnight_3D

Hey Nuclear thanks, the cylinder is just a quick bit of rope. 

Boyso

Looks good. I own one so if I may, I'll just point out a few things I noticed quickly

The front grille shape is a bit off. The whole thing should be much rounder and the slits rounder as well. The headlights should also be pushed in. See : http://www.willys-overland.com/misc/MB-100063 Grille - Probable License Plate Mount Method.jpg

The whole tub seems a bit too large and thin, it should be thicker (think thick steel that is press-formed.) There also isn't a tailgate on the real thing. I'd make the fender slightly taller with the outside edge rounded off. These are really thin though in real life. 


If you need references, I have plenty of photos of mine

But yeah I'd really concentrate on the front grille, it's what makes most people recognise a Willys jeep. If you have a hard time finding references, Google with the term 'G503', it's the codename for the jeep.

AdamJKnight_3D

Thanks Boyso, yeah the front is a bit wrong im going to get to it , thanks for your indepth thoughts, i have taken note.