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Tear my work up PT. 1 F/A-18SX

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Davis237 polycounter lvl 6
Mod idea for Arma 3 would like some feedback on the overall piece, know somethings need to be fix but looking for anything i may have missed. Tear it up.  

3D viewer can be seen here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3bRXm

Original Concept Found on Redit:



What i made:



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  • Bletzkarn
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    Bletzkarn polycounter lvl 6
    I'm just wondering why your plane body is such high poly compared to the wings. It creates a bit of a jarring contrast especially with those harder edges. Yea that is what jumped out to me, you have this really nice smoothed body and then it's accompanied by these quite sharp edges. Like your model doesn't know if it's low poly or not. Also it looks like the textures are just diffuse not sure if ARMA supports bump maps on models. I like the design just might need more polishing.
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