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The Beast - The Warrior

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Update to description: "If Elof feels lucky to have found his place in life, you wouldn’t know it from his cantankerous temperament. His story began when he could no longer afford the small plot of land that he loved. His landowner offered him a position as a security guard in return for allowing him to continue living there, which suited Elof perfectly. Staunchly protective, he remained distrustful of nearly everyone. His service was grudgingly admired, but people were careful to avoid getting too close to this unpredictable ‘creature’. False deference or platitudes were known to irritate him and sometimes provoke a violent outburst."

(Final submission near the end of the thread)

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I have been trying to come up with interesting character ideas, and I've settled on this for now:

"You would do well to be on the side of this formidable warrior. When he is not fighting on behalf of a noble cause he believes in, his imposing appearance dissuades unwanted attacks. He is loyal to a select few and remains distrustful of nearly everyone. Not everyone is keen to befriend him either. False deference or platitudes will irritate him and sometimes provoke a violent outburst."

Edit - newer concept:


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