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Pig W.I.P. Help and Feedback

andropof
andropof
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andropof polycounter lvl 3
Hi,
i want to show you my progress about a pig I'm sculpting in ZBrush.
Also i need feedback to improve it, because as you can see I'm pretty new in organic modeling. 

~Day1


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  • andropof
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    andropof polycounter lvl 3


    ~Day2
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  • VanLogan
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    VanLogan polycounter lvl 10
    What are you using for reference? Things I see that you could improve:
     The legs are too straight, looking at a few pig images I see that the back knees draft in and then the lower limb goes vertical. 
    Also the underside of the jaw looks way to flat, even lean pigs have some roundness there. Kinda like this: 

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  • redcap
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    redcap polycounter lvl 12
    My eyes went straight to the head, that is the biggest issue with the current model. The head needs to move up and be bigger. The snout also needs to be broadened. If you rotate your model to the same angle as the reference image you will see your pigs back is a little convex where it should actually have a subtle concavity to it. You will also see what I mean by the head, as it is now it is in the middle of the body, and it should be towards the top of the body. Hope that helps. 
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