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Rusty Retro Fuel Pump

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merwynl polycounter lvl 8
Hey all,

Here's a small work in progress on an asset I've been working on to test out Quixel Suite 2. Noticed a few small issues with it but I'd appreciate any feedback or advice that you guys can give me. Happy 2016 !

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  • Eric Chadwick
    Embed the image in your post, makes it easier for your viewers. The more clicks, the less views you get.

    I think it's looking great. The stickers on the side seem really bright though, almost emissive.
  • merwynl
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    merwynl polycounter lvl 8
    Thanks Eric! I've updated the post. The brightness is because I had left the headlight feature on and the intensity had been cranked up a fair bit hehe. Oops.

    Changed the styling a bit on the signage. Also tweaked the emissive on the sign so it's not so bright. Added a bit of dirt and grime to the sign and a bit of oil slick on the pump chasis itself and threw on a bit of post-process. Still need to tweak the mask for the oil slick a little bit more I think. Also still need to dirty up the nozzle and holster, they're looking waaay too clean right now. Sign also needs smoothing out I think

    Edit: Did not save for web. Went back and corrected that.

     



  • Eric Chadwick
    Yeah, the low poly curvature is the first thing that strikes my eye. Gas sign needs some water staining, or similar (compared to amount of metal rust below). Not sure if Wookie bumpersticker fits here, and Arabic rapper (?) image below.
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