Leopard Tank 2a6

AtomicArmy

Hello Polycount, I've been working on this project for a couple of months now (mainly learning game model workflow).  3ds max, Zbrush, Substance Painter and Designer and Xnormal was used. Rendered in Marmoset 2. I also have some Substance Materials to present that I created for painting.


Old version:


Wireframe:

Substance Materials

Dethling

Good work so far.
Critic:
- the additional plaes on the turrets ftonr look a little strange, like they were deformed. I would check the high poly & cage here.
- the dort on the side looks wrong. Try to get some pictures from "in field" Leos

3dReaper

The main critique I have is the presentation. Get rid of most of the screen effects, especially the scratches and lens flare. Also I wouldn't render on a black background, the contrast is far too strong a gradient gray would be better. I would also say the classic German camouflage would be better suited however that's up to you.



Where is the wear and tear, burn mark at the end of the barrel, pitted metal, etc. Take a look at some of the World of Tanks artists, they are phenomenal examples of tank art.

https://www.artstation.com/artist/pavelpetrenko

https://www.artstation.com/artist/merc-ai

AtomicArmy

Decided to go back to this piece and improve it a little. Also, thank you for the help!

AtomicArmy

Bump:

AtomicArmy

Hi, just
decided to go back and fix the tank up. I've been getting a portfolio together and this is my first finished piece. I've also been dabbling around with houdini apprentice which an awesome program and marmoset toolbag 3.