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Ash - Female Game Character

A new character I've been working on.


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  • linwail
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    linwail polycounter lvl 5
    Her arms seem waaay too skinny. This is coming from someone with incredibly skinny arms. I think the model will look much better once the arms are fixed. I would also exaggerate her lady curves a little. 
  • Crazy_pixel
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    Crazy_pixel interpolator
    I don't know which direction your character is going, but I think it would be interesting when you try to work with stronger combinations between a tree and the female shapes. Ok, the branches are a little bit too strong but the deformations of his arms and torso are quite interesting.
    It is just an idea :)

    For example:

  • Popol
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    Popol interpolator
    Yeah, the proportions are all over the place =/
    Explaining what's wrong would be too difficult so I made a paintover :



    The bark skin looks cool but like CRAZY_PIXEL said you just slapped bark on a female body without making any association between the two. So yeah, pushing toward some tree like shapes would make it a way better character. After fixing the anatomy of course :)
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