Gesundheit!
polycounter lvl 8
Hey everyone.
This is a little sneeze exercise I've been working on and wanted to share to it to start getting back involved in online animation communities!
I still need more polish (like I barely touched his right arm), but I would greatly appreciate any feedback you guys offer at this point. Thanks a lot!
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c9e39dbb7cb24022b83b7582016fbc0a#51246
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2Yun-po6HY
This is a little sneeze exercise I've been working on and wanted to share to it to start getting back involved in online animation communities!
I still need more polish (like I barely touched his right arm), but I would greatly appreciate any feedback you guys offer at this point. Thanks a lot!
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c9e39dbb7cb24022b83b7582016fbc0a#51246
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2Yun-po6HY
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I'd say the only thing standing out is when he does the big sneeze his head hits a certain position and it feels like it's static for a few frames. A smoother arc would help this. If you track the motion trail of his bottom lip, F73 is where it jars. I've tried this syncsketch for the first time to try and illustrate what I am saying haha. Red is the current position/arc of bottom lip, green is where it could be to be a smooth arc.
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/c9e39dbb7cb24022b83b7582016fbc0a#51246
(I guess I'm fdas)
The poses are great I should add =]