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Purefire's Recent Concept Art

Been working towards becoming a concept artist so I've been working hard and would really love some Crits. 





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  • lotet
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    lotet hero character
    hey!
    you have good looking proportions and your rendering is pretty solid. Your design skills are descent but a bit generic. Im personally not a fan of your overwatch redesigns, they are kind of tasteless with all that exposed skin, but thats my personal opinion. on top of that your ladies look like a porn stars with the faces of 16 year old girls :neutral: 

    as for the rendering I think you could spend more time with cleanup, you have a lot of blobby mushy shapes. look at tracers hair for example, you can clearly see that you made a basic shape and then just wen crazy with the smudge tool. your kind of mixing hard and soft brushes arbitrary. 

    overall you have a lot of talent a good start, a good sense of rendering an anatomy, but your rendering could use a bit more clean up, and  and you could spend more time in the design fase.

    Goodl luck!
  • RainbowRat
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    RainbowRat polycounter lvl 3
    I agree with Lotet. Proportions are great and blending/rendering looks already really good as well! Something seems to be off with the male character´s face though. I think the eyes are a little too long, maybe you should round them up a bit. But then again, I´m not perfect with faces anyway ^^'

    As for the concepts, well, what are you aiming for? Whats the concept behind the characters? Are they just random mecha sci fi soldiers? Not really original. If you´re aiming for something more scifi you could replace body parts with glas or hologram-like stuff like this https://de.pinterest.com/pin/532902568378581702/ I´m sure opinions split here but I thought it was pretty unique, cartoonish though. You already added some fur on the male´s shoulder plate, maybe you can elaborate that further. And try to emphasize the person´s character or profession by making the shilouette a little more obvious? The women´s shapes look all the same to me.

  • Purefire
    Thanks guys, I will definitely look at pushing better designs and thinking of different body shapes to help fix that up. Will make sure to take a look at the the cleanup issues and add more to faces. Thanks again!
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