Indivisible - Razmi

cybuster · Nov 2015

Finished my piece, enjoy!
This game is so sweet and has so much potential, I love the crossovers they are adding and I hope I can win this contest and they get the funding needed to make this game.
The piece was so much fun to work on and I hope to dish out more amazing pieces in the future.

www.support-indivisible.com

Hi there, I'll be posting my WIP for my entry to the Indivisible fan art contest on this thread.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lu/a111kpn4ootb.jpg

Any CC would be greatly appreciated!
I know it seems like an early WIP but I'd like to catch any mistakes early on.

cybuster · Nov 2015

Just about finished blocking out everything but the hair. I think I'm ready to go into the detail and defining the shapes.

TomGT · Nov 2015

Hey Eddy! Cool choice of character. I was looking at this game too, love their designs.

Are you modelling her to pose? Since you're blocking her in I thought I'd mention that, in the concept art she appears like she is doing a hunched pose, with her chest tilting forwards.

If you can get your model to do the same, I think your forms can be better compared to the concept art if you are trying to imitate that specific pose. Other minor adjustments you could do is to lift her lantern hand a little higher, and perhaps make her dress a tad more puffier.

Keep it up and good luck on the contest!

cybuster · Nov 2015

@TomGT Thanks!

Added hair and started to further blocked out the tiger skin.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/md/kicu3qyoevht.jpg

cybuster · Nov 2015

Almost there...

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/po/ahp9neixpgmz.jpg

cybuster · Nov 2015

I'm pretty much calling it done. I really don't know what else to add aside from a few things like a pedestal and fix the tiger pelt a bit. Will post a beauty shot soon! Hope you like it!

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/qe/dtul62iszvzr.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/tz/82v3xjegi44k.jpg

cybuster · Nov 2015

Upon advice given to me, I improved the hand to make the overall piece that much better.
Beauty shot is in the first thread.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ho/4wsciuomdtba.jpg

DashXero · Nov 2015

I don't wanna be "that guy" but I feel that the way the fur detail was implemented kinda detracts from the forms. I think there's too much fur detail that affects the silhouette, but doesn't necessarily complement it. Specifically, the tiger. Forgive me. I should have said something earlier.

Overall, great work, though. It's really nice.

cybuster · Nov 2015

Thanks @DashXero
I'll keep it in mind for next time.

Indivisible - Razmi

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