Hi guys, i just registered here. Newbie~~~~~ Here i want to share some personal work and some work that i did for some classes (BrainStorm School) Hope you guys enjoy it , (C&C always welcome!!!!!)
Sweet man! Just saw you post some of your line art on a critique on Level Up and now I get to see your paintings here. Good work man and I'm excited to see your improvement. I'll hold off with any critiques until you post a few more pieces so I can kinda see what it is you're trying to do with where you're at. Its always hard sometimes when you're in a hardcore learning cycle to show everything you know in every piece so saying stuff about 1 or 2 pieces that you already know isn't super helpful.
Sweet looking concepts, nice work on those texture stretches! I have some critique though. Although the first image gives me a story to read while watching (some dead space stuff going on there) the second one is really something more architecture concept. Also you have repeated the same texture over and over again. I don't know maybe you had a reason for that, but if you didn't I would try to flesh it out with something different too. Good work overall I love your composition! keep up the good work! and welcome to polycount!
@"Greg Westphal" Hey!!!!!! Cool to see you here again hahaha. Thanks for the reply man I definitely will post more stuff in the future, cant wait to get some critique from you. Love hearing comments.
@mtsirides Thanks!!!!, you are 100% right. The top one is more straight forward, space destruction. Kinda a test to see how can i play with shapes and destruction. The second one is more just a place that build by these huge cables that wraps around. Also wanna to test myself to see if i can use one texture only haha. Thats why I only used one haha. Composition wise...hmm...they are hard man. Glad you like it, i am still trying to come up some better and different composition!!!
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I definitely will post more stuff in the future, cant wait to get some critique from you. Love hearing comments.
@mtsirides Thanks!!!!, you are 100% right. The top one is more straight forward, space destruction. Kinda a test to see how can i play with shapes and destruction. The second one is more just a place that build by these huge cables that wraps around. Also wanna to test myself to see if i can use one texture only haha. Thats why I only used one haha. Composition wise...hmm...they are hard man. Glad you like it, i am still trying to come up some better and different composition!!!
Never a fan of the depth of field stuff, but why not.
I will try in the future