Thompson - M1928 old pew pew :)

JGreentheRookie

This is a new folio piece I'm working on at the moment.

Feel free to critique.

This is an older HP version, new one will follow soon.

JGreentheRookie

JGreentheRookie

Just finished the model. Any critique welcome

kohg

I like it. I think some of the bump, specially on the wood needs to be more subtle.

Jack M.

Your normal strength is way too strong on the wood. I also think your metal could use a little more work in the roughness to make the whole piece a little more interesting.

I do like your wear quite a bit. It's very believable in my opinion.

Lord Striker

Yeah, I agree with the wood critiques. It looks very rubbery. Other than that, great job.

JGreentheRookie

Thanks foe critique update will be up in a bit

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kohg

Looking much better already.