Boss pantomime scene from 'The Errand Boy'

Fuzhark

I recently finished my animation of the "boss pantomime scene" from the movie The Errand Boy and I want some views and critics from fellow animators.

[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHXn3ra27wg[/ame]

I used the rig from this site since I'm not very experienced with creating own rigs. Hopefully I'll have my own good rig someday.

Also, if anyone is interested, feel free to check out the rest of the animations on my YouTube-channel.

Feedback is greatly appreciated!

penOr

Hey fuzhark, I thought this was a pretty cool idea ! Very fun to watch

The main thing that stood out to me was the lack of arcing movements, particularly the hands, however that may be a stylistic thing since he is sort of a puppet character? Simply adding an inbetween frame to make an arc instead of a straight line from A to B would add a lot to the hand motions I think

Fuzhark

Hey, penOr.

The lack of arcing movements was actually not wholly intended, but more a result of my impatience to be finished. But eventhough I was somewhat aware of it, it is good of you to point it out to me. Having others commenting on such will make me focus more on fixing that in the future.

Thanks for the feedback.