championship Shyvana Fan art (Wip) Feedback wanted

Skylarc · Sep 2015

Wip of my championship Shyvana Fan art
there still something thats not quite right about the proportions but i cant put my finger on it :X

any good advise for preportions and over all shape?
would really apprichiate it

have a great day guys

this is the concept im following, By Brandon Liao
http://madspartan013.deviantart.com/art/Championship-Shyvana-488971248

Stinkfoot · Sep 2015

The posted picture is a tad small, hard to make out the details, that or I need glasses.

Skylarc · Sep 2015

Stinkfoot wrote: »

The posted picture is a tad small, hard to make out the details, that or I need glasses.

should be better now

? i dident realise it was so small

Skylarc · Oct 2015

update

Mstankow · Oct 2015

I did the dragon model for the game. Good luck.

Also, I need to get an artstation up and I'll try to get approval from Riot to post the model of the dragon.

CafeNight · Oct 2015

face isnt pretty thats it. everything is fine at this stage and look concept she is more elegant than ur shyva
anyway her hands and arms looks ugly
show model w/o armor

Tectonic · Oct 2015

I think your model's shoulders and hips are wider than in the concept. and the weapons on her hands need to be a bit longer/flatter.

Skylarc · Oct 2015

thank you for all the feedback

its awsome

here is a new Wip

Skylarc · Oct 2015

Skylarc · Oct 2015

Skylarc · Nov 2015

New wip

starting to look decent

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/h0/mletyg24zsbc.jpg

Skylarc · Nov 2015

got any good last min feedback for me before i move on to the Lowpoly? (only thing i know i need to fix is some objects that are not meged yet and have seams, and the claws need straightening)

bit more info about it on my Artstation if your interested https://www.artstation.com/artwork/KRWLG

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/c7/l4qwdo2ds3tn.jpg

TomGT · Nov 2015

Hey Skylarc! Great job on the Shyv sculpt. Very clean and it seems mighty fine to bake.

I think her neck area might benefit from popping her collar a bit more like you originally had in your first WIP shot in this thread. That way the neck will feel like it has more volume, and less narrow, to match the concept.

Keep up the great work!