Flipside's Progression: Critique/Feedback pls.

flipside8404

So back to basic..I will try to do a daily sculpt, studying mostly anatomy, with a goal to start sculpting full characters. Feedback and critique's (specially paint over - visual learner) greatly appreciated.

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Just finished while following a Digitaltutors tutorial. I had some difficulty with the overall shape of the skull, specially how it rounds around the back looking from the front view.

flipside8404

my attempt on the face plane...this is hard..[IMG][/img]

Har

I think you subdivided the head too much, start at a low subdivision and then make as much details as possible and after that increase a subdivision level to refine those details.

Ged

I think the head looks a little wide from the side view, the jaw seems quite long.

flipside8404

Ged wrote: »

I think the head looks a little wide from the side view, the jaw seems quite long.

@Har: thanks, I actually used Dynamesh so there's no subdivision, but you are right..I think my Dynamesh resolution to start it was too high. I need to practice focusing on forms first before the details. Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep in mind for my next one.

@Ged thanks for feedback..I did some changes on the side view and jaw



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Tectonic

you can use the Planar brush to get some nice flat surface to that face, play around with its Depth in the Brush settings

flipside8404

Tectonic wrote: »

you can use the Planar brush to get some nice flat surface to that face, play around with its Depth in the Brush settings

Thanks for the tip..I've just been using pinch and trim dynamic/hpolish. I'll give the planar brush a go!

flipside8404

Started a study of the torso anatomy..feedback appreciated before I continue.thanks

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flipside8404

2 hours later....I am not too sure about the abdominal muscles..somethings off about it but I cant seem to point me finger on it...


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flipside8404

Arm study...feedback/critique please!

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flipside8404

For my daily sculpt.. I practiced on doing the leg anatomy...feedback/critique please

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flipside8404

Trying to put what I am learning in practice...practice face sculpt..I know the ears need some love...any tips of sculpting ears in Zbrush? Separate sub tool?

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flipside8404

Hands and feet...the bane of my existence even with 2D drawings..I decided to get an early start today to get it over with..part 1 of my daily sculpt for today...Need feedback/critique please, it's hard to move forward not knowing what I am doing is helping me or not..lol Thanks.

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flipside8404

I bit the bullet and tried sculpting a foot..ugh..I need more practice! feedback/critique please.

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putka

Clearly a huge improvement over your protfolio anatomies. You're on the right path

flipside8404

putka wrote: »

Clearly a huge improvement over your protfolio anatomies. You're on the right path

Thank you for the input.

flipside8404

long day today..but I have to squeeze in a sculpt..I always have trouble drawing a female face/body...this is more of a proportion study...first time sculpting a female...she still looks a bit manly specially the face area..any tips? Thanks in advance...[IMG][/img]