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Help of Anatomy please...

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Vailys polycounter lvl 2
Hello everyone !

In order to progress, i've fixed myself the task to create a character that i will then rig and animate, and be able to "customize" (like in some video games).

Actually, i'm creating the model itself, but i still have things to learn in anatomy so i feel there are some things wrong with my character.

So i'm posting it here, hoping that some of you will have the kindness to help me improve my work and give my some advice.

Any opinion or suggestion would be greatly appreciated ! :)

Have a nice day.


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  • jfitch
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    jfitch polycounter lvl 5
    Hey Vailys!

    Since you've posted an entire human model here it would take a while to go through each part of the body, but what I would recommend is getting those forms developed a little more. At the current stage it looks like everything is kind of painted on and the form doesn't change much, especially in the torso. The silhouette of the character feels pretty good, as do the proportions, though I would take another look at the lower leg.

    Hands are very sausage-y, if that makes sense. I would look at bridgeman's constructive anatomy to get a sense of how the planes and forms of the hands should look. As a matter of fact looking at how he constructs anything is very helpful for anatomy.

    I would also check out Rafael Grassetti's tutorial on gumroad for anatomy if you haven't yet! https://gumroad.com/grassettiart if you don't want to spend the money on that tutorial, at least getting his reference model for half the price is worth it.
  • Vailys
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    Vailys polycounter lvl 2
    Hello jfitch!

    Thank you very much for your patience and your feedback.

    I 'm going to start !

    The price of the tutorials are really affordable!
    (Thank you!)
    I'll post later evolution to new reviews!
  • Vailys
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    Vailys polycounter lvl 2
    Hi!
    here's an update of characters.
    What do you think?

    Have a nice day!:)


    WIP3.jpg
  • Vailys
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    Vailys polycounter lvl 2
    Hello again :)

    It's been a while but i'm still working on my character ! What do you think about it ? Do you see anything weird in its anatomy ?

    I've mostly worked on the chest and the head, and a bit on the legs too.

    I'm planning to rig it and animate it later, and i will also make it so i can create different kind of anatomy from this model (a bit like a character creation en games :D).

    Any advice and opinion would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks !

    [imglink]http://frederique-loizeau.satyrs-game-studio.com/images/works/WIP6.png[/imglink]
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