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A Flamethrower

Goldchain
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First portfolio piece once baked down and textured. Loosely followed concept by Sergey Vasnev. Didn't add any floating geo or smaller poly-detail since I plan on adding it with NDO.

Tear me to pieces, plz.


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  • Cglewis
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    Cglewis polycounter lvl 12
    Looking good man, love the renders!

    I think some of the edges are hard and could use a bevel...especially around the flame gaurd and other areas.

    if the way i understand flamer throwers to work....which i may not hahaha.....it appears that you have the line under than main barrel connected to the tank.....i feel this is the opposite the little line should be the pilot light that lights when the lighted is ejected out of the top barrel.

    and i feel that pilot light area could use more detail to help show what it is
  • Goldchain
    Thanks for the feedback. I need to bevel it and see how it feels.

    About the hose, you're completely right. Didn't even realize it'll give the illusion like it's connected to the pilot light's hose. I think I need to hook it to the side panel to sell it off better. It'd also provide a great place for a pressure gauge. ;)
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