This ball isn't steady! -Looking for feedback-

Melim

Hi guys!

I'm a student in a digital art school and I want to specialize in animation. I'm working on this short animation for my final project and I'm looking forward to improve it!
https://vimeo.com/139005885

I still need to work on the ball itself, but I think the character is almost finish. What do you think? I'm still new to animation so any kind of tips will be great

Thanks for your help!

Arturow

for being new thats quite impressive ! , I think that when he falls he is overreacting ( when he bounces back his body) I suggest you tone down that movement and it will look more "realistic". Very nice arc on his <--- hand at the beginning

keep up the good work !

Melim

Thanks a lot for the feedback Arturow!
I'll work on it and I will post the result here

monster

Nice work! Here's my feedback.

1. I would probably have him looking down at his feet for a little bit at the beginning.
2. To really sell the gag, you should have him start off shaky, steady out, and then a sudden epic fall.
3. Your fall is currently more of a slide off. I would really exaggerate it. Think a comedian slipping on a banana peel.

linwail

I would definitely tone down the fall. To me it doesn't look very realistic. The timing also feels a bit off for me. Very slow feeling over all

Melim

Thanks to everyone for the advices!

I've been caught up in other projects lately, but I finally had time to work on this!!!
I changed essentially the beginning and the fall. I know that I still have work to do on the ball.

Any suggestions to improve it?

https://vimeo.com/142001747

Thanks