TheKlu's improvement thread - Critiques are welcome! :)

TheKlu

Hello so, i'll post here my process of sculpting, texturing, modeling etc.
So this is my first body sculpt, (It's a very slim guy lol)

Here we go:




And here's a quick video of the process https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-9JtoFjdl3c&feature=youtu.be

It probably have tons of anatomy problems, i didn't used any image reference :poly005:
So that's it for now

TheWalkerGod

Can you post a more straight on view of the sculpt. It's kinda hard to judge when it's best like that, especially since some of the muscles don't look like they're reacting like they should when bent. From what i can tell, deltoids are never that circular

they're more this shape:

http://www.criticalbench.com/images/strengthen-rear-deltoids1.jpg

Also the latissimus dorsi look to narrow and far outward (that or the spines too far inward). Also his butt looks really deformed. Are you using a reference?

TheKlu

TheWalkerGod wrote: »

Can you post a more straight on view of the sculpt. It's kinda hard to judge when it's best like that, especially since some of the muscles don't look like they're reacting like they should when bent. From what i can tell, deltoids are never that circular

they're more this shape:

http://www.criticalbench.com/images/strengthen-rear-deltoids1.jpg

Also the latissimus dorsi look to narrow and far outward (that or the spines too far inward). Also his butt looks really deformed. Are you using a reference?

Oh thanks you!!
Nope i didn't used any referece for it. His butt is that deformed beacause he's very under wheight, it's suppesed to be almost a zombie lol But still have many problems. From now on i'll look up for references. I really appreciate your feedback it really help out!

TheWalkerGod

no problem