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Zenyatta -Overwatch Fanart

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The original Overwatch art:
concept: Arnold Tsang
model: Renaud Galand


Firstly, I appreciate any critiques or comments :)
I started this model after talking to a friend that wanted a blizzard character to rig. Doing a project with someone or for someone always helps motivate me. I was reading up on Overwatch and really loved this guy. I loved the model and concept, so I hope I can do it justice. I'm finally texturing which is probably the most enjoyable part :D

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I redid the pattern on the skirt using a displacement map. What I sculpted by hand wasn't really cutting it. I had to do alot of polish to make sure the pattern was more organic looking, and make it not look like a stamp.

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This is is my bake with some colors on it. I think I want to make the metal look like metal using PBR workflow. I will keep this updated. I really want to get this to Sketchfab!
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  • Neox
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    Neox godlike master sticky
    great start! but it is too early to bake, the high would need quite a bit more polish.

    the metalparts feel lumpy at places and the whole cloth could be simplified and stylized more

    personally I think you could model more and sculpt less, especially on the metal parts
  • kmactastic
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    kmactastic polycounter lvl 8
    Thank you Neox! for the feedback. It is what I need.

    I hope you see this. Could you explain simplifying the cloth more? Like get rid of some of the folds? I will revisit the metal especially on the legs. I was trying to make it look worn but it does look lumpy.
  • Neox
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    Neox godlike master sticky
    just check all the overwatch characters, their cloth is much simpler, fewer and more angular folds, yours almost feels natural in comparison
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