The House on The River Diorama

Lubel

Hey, my second post here.
My first post had no comments hahaha
Anyway , I have finished my first work with
handpainted texture.
Here is the result ...
I would like some feedbacks about that!
=D

foreverlost

I like the composition and the hand drawn textures but think you could push them more. The rocks do not look like the same style as the rest of the assets.

There is weird noisiness in the water, and weird specks elsewhere that look like dust or something. I think you can do better than the sky noisiness as well. The grass texture also looks on the low res side.

laforced

Good start!

Lubel

foreverlost wrote: »

I like the composition and the hand drawn textures but think you could push them more. The rocks do not look like the same style as the rest of the assets.

There is weird noisiness in the water, and weird specks elsewhere that look like dust or something. I think you can do better than the sky noisiness as well. The grass texture also looks on the low res side.

Hey man, thx for feedback.
I don't know what happening with the grass texture. In the Marmoset it's ok but in the final image looks like that. . =(
But, is too difficult do water in Marmoset... hahaha

laforced wrote: »

Good start!

Thx man...
I'm working on another model with the same workflow. I'll post it when it's finished.:)

urgaffel

It's a nice start but at the moment everything is very straight. You could spend some polys and make the straight lines a bit more wonky, it could tie in well with the hand painted look...

Chimp

vary the width and length of the planks